30 July 2006

Orwellian rules to writing better prose

i just finished reading a great essay by George Orwell on the death of effective and beautiful prose in the English language.

The essay culminates in a list of five rules for prose writing:
  1. Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
  2. Never use a long word where a short one will do.
  3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
  4. Never use the passive where you can use the active.
  5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
  6. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
if you've ever read anything by Orwell, you know he is one of the all-time great writers, and a master at non-fiction, biographical/historical works (Homage to Catalonia and Down and Out in Paris and London are masterpieces).

i think most (if not all) of these rules apply just as well to poetry. and are often the main reasons bad poetry is bad. Rules 2, 3, 4 and 5 seem the most important to me. Simplicity, beauty and originality is the name of the game.

and i suppose Rule 6 is what we call "poetic license." just don't make use of that license too much or it could end up being revoked.

4 comments:

Kat said...

The word that...it's my problem. I always have to go back and cross out every THAT in my stuff.

Those are great rules. Will have to read that when (if?) I ever get a moment to myself again!

:)

christopher cunningham said...

a great post. orwell knew his buisness. well done, j.b.

j.b said...

THAT is a toughie...i'll admit to being a "that-whore", too..

yes, Orwell was a great writer. even though this essay is dated, i think it's points are still valid.

also, i'm afraid too many writers take up residence in Rule 6, without realizing that Rules 1-5 are the important ones (and Rule 6 is reserved for the rare occassion that Rules 1-5 just won't get the job done).

Luis said...

And for description, read, Shooting an Elephant, by Orwell.