The essay culminates in a list of five rules for prose writing:
- Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
- Never use a long word where a short one will do.
- If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
- Never use the passive where you can use the active.
- Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
- Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
i think most (if not all) of these rules apply just as well to poetry. and are often the main reasons bad poetry is bad. Rules 2, 3, 4 and 5 seem the most important to me. Simplicity, beauty and originality is the name of the game.
and i suppose Rule 6 is what we call "poetic license." just don't make use of that license too much or it could end up being revoked.
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The word that...it's my problem. I always have to go back and cross out every THAT in my stuff.
Those are great rules. Will have to read that when (if?) I ever get a moment to myself again!
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a great post. orwell knew his buisness. well done, j.b.
THAT is a toughie...i'll admit to being a "that-whore", too..
yes, Orwell was a great writer. even though this essay is dated, i think it's points are still valid.
also, i'm afraid too many writers take up residence in Rule 6, without realizing that Rules 1-5 are the important ones (and Rule 6 is reserved for the rare occassion that Rules 1-5 just won't get the job done).
And for description, read, Shooting an Elephant, by Orwell.
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